Comet- A freeride/fun time deck

[Petary791]

Hey fonsle, think about adding the comet C in the middle of your first, and IMO better, graphic?

[Rayman75MM]

another try! any thoughts and comments are welcome
other sketches are here : Pictures by fonsle - Photobucket

I would dig it more I think if the sort of neon frame wasnt as square, kinda went more with the shape of the board, and kinda do little designs in the extra room around the text, then the brand in the middle. Great job dude!

[chandler95]

Heh....I would want to buy it even more if it has the spaghetti monster on it...

[dozerdoggie]

another try! any thoughts and comments are welcome
other sketches are here : Pictures by fonsle - Photobucket

Looks like a good start

[rodgon]

the monster does have alot of appeal. plus you can market it better. rather than just a logo.

[dozerdoggie]

Heh....I would want to buy it even more if it has the spaghetti monster on it...

Yea me to

[fonsle]

hey guys, thanks for all the feedback. i try my best to include all of your ideas.
what i have done:
1. changed the shape of the frame to better fit the shape of the board (Rayman75MM's idea)
2. inserted the Comet Logo in the middle (Rayman,Zampraz,Petary)
3. changed colors of the frame and the circle in the middle a little (tell me how you like it)

I still need to do something with the space in between. I got some ideas but i am way too tired now (It's 1 am over here)

so here's the >> UPDATE <<

byebye

benjamin

[Blix]

Lose the frame and it would look a lot better, Benjamin.

[amato]

Here is a drawing i made with my terrible artistic ability. If people like the dinosaur-ish drawing maybe someone could make it on their computer who actually has skill
If you're wondering what the cord is it's supposed to be connected to, it's an outlet. I also don't know how to embed pictures so here's the link. comet drawing picture by terradactylboy - Photobucket
sweet it actually embedded

[dozerdoggie]

Here is a drawing i made with my terrible artistic ability. If people like the dinosaur-ish drawing maybe someone could make it on their computer who actually has skill
If you're wondering what the cord is it's supposed to be connected to, it's an outlet. I also don't know how to embed pictures so here's the link. comet drawing picture by terradactylboy - Photobucket
sweet it actually embedded

I like the Crayola effect of your art

[fonsle]

Lose the frame and it would look a lot better, Benjamin.

Oh no Amund! You hate the frame? It took forever to draw it haha thanks anyway

[charger_doc]

so here's the >> UPDATE <<

byebye

benjamin

[fonsle]

thanks doc

i think i will rework the graphic another time until sunday.
@Blix: I will think about the frame also

[chaoselephant23]

Agreed. Love the 'CometOgether' font.

[jkpvilla]

can this one win? please?

[ZampraZ]

^ lol

10char

[chandler95]

Are the colors limited to purple and yellow? I think a green/yellow would be pretty cool too...

[dozerdoggie]

can this one win? please?

The only thing better than boobies is pie

[Satt Mullivan]

I got a feeling the boobies are gonna win

[jshalvorsen]

So after thinking way too much about this board.. here is my first graphic suggestion:


May be too much work to brand all those logo's

But I think they'd look cool in neon green/yellow as well..