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    Here's a Tanka (Japanese 5-7-5-7-7 poetry) from my travel diary. I am going to try and write the diary up fully and publish it, so consider this a preview:

    Afternoon sunlight
    Illuminates the maple
    Brown leaves are forming
    Autumn will be coming soon
    And with it, my journey's end



    Copyright me 2004 yada yada improper use yada yada break bones, violate family members yada yada yada.
    Srini is still my Homeboy
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    Quote Originally Posted by Deus_Horribilus
    Here's a Tanka (Japanese 5-7-5-7-7 poetry) from my travel diary. I am going to try and write the diary up fully and publish it, so consider this a preview:

    Afternoon sunlight
    Illuminates the maple
    Brown leaves are forming
    Autumn will be coming soon
    And with it, my journey's end



    Copyright me 2004 yada yada improper use yada yada break bones, violate family members yada yada yada.
    What are you gonna do if I breach copywright? Yeah, now you're ****ed!
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    Quote Originally Posted by lexx
    Afternoon sunlight
    Illuminates the maple
    Brown leaves are forming
    Autumn will be coming soon
    And with it, my journey's end
    Shaven Fish Member #00013. Wait, I've got to shave my balls? Huck it, I'll take one for the team

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    Quote Originally Posted by raven6241
    What are you gonna do if I breach copywright? Yeah, now you're ****ed!
    I would have thought "Go **** yourself" would have been more apt. You're losing your touch dude. Just look after your kneecaps until I see you next.
    Srini is still my Homeboy
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    Quote Originally Posted by Deus_Horribilus
    Quote Originally Posted by raven6241
    What are you gonna do if I breach copywright? Yeah, now you're ****ed!
    I would have thought "Go **** yourself" would have been more apt. You're losing your touch dude. Just look after your kneecaps until I see you next.

    How about this for losing my touch?






    Uh..... shut up willyface!!






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    we take the drugs to kill the pain
    we drink the drink to kill the brain
    the liver can take it
    the heart is strong
    fuck streight edge
    that shit's just WRONG.
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    Alternative Last Lines
    ROCK THE BONG

    WEAR A THONG

    I WANT TO BE CHEECH AND/OR CHONG
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    See Jane.

    See Jane run.

    Run bitch run.
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    one last time
    for old times sake
    buy the booze
    set the date
    I'll drink till your sober
    don't challange me to a race
    24 cans of stella
    i'll wife beat your face
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    ever so emo
    I cry as you leave
    "why did she leave me"
    "why did she leave me"
    I am so emo


    Being sober gives me loads of spare time to write junk.[tear]
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    I'm drunk off my ass
    Just punched a lamp post
    Shaved my head to look like CRASS
    I feel harder than most
    My poem sucks ass
    I used ass twice in the same post
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    Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary,
    Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,
    While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
    As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
    `'Tis some visitor,' I muttered, `tapping at my chamber door -
    Only this, and nothing more.'

    Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
    And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
    Eagerly I wished the morrow; - vainly I had sought to borrow
    From my books surcease of sorrow - sorrow for the lost Lenore -
    For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels named Lenore -
    Nameless here for evermore.

    And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain
    Thrilled me - filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before;
    So that now, to still the beating of my heart, I stood repeating
    `'Tis some visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door -
    Some late visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door; -
    This it is, and nothing more,'

    Presently my soul grew stronger; hesitating then no longer,
    `Sir,' said I, `or Madam, truly your forgiveness I implore;
    But the fact is I was napping, and so gently you came rapping,
    And so faintly you came tapping, tapping at my chamber door,
    That I scarce was sure I heard you' - here I opened wide the door; -
    Darkness there, and nothing more.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
    Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
    But the silence was unbroken, and the darkness gave no token,
    And the only word there spoken was the whispered word, `Lenore!'
    This I whispered, and an echo murmured back the word, `Lenore!'
    Merely this and nothing more.

    Back into the chamber turning, all my soul within me burning,
    Soon again I heard a tapping somewhat louder than before.
    `Surely,' said I, `surely that is something at my window lattice;
    Let me see then, what thereat is, and this mystery explore -
    Let my heart be still a moment and this mystery explore; -
    'Tis the wind and nothing more!'

    Open here I flung the shutter, when, with many a flirt and flutter,
    In there stepped a stately raven6241 of the saintly days of yore.
    Not the least obeisance made he; not a minute stopped or stayed he;
    But, with mien of lord or lady, perched above my chamber door -
    Perched upon a bust of Pallas just above my chamber door -
    Perched, and sat, and nothing more.

    Then this ebony bird beguiling my sad fancy into smiling,
    By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore,
    `Though thy crest be shorn and shaven, thou,' I said, `art sure no craven.
    Ghastly grim and ancient raven6241 wandering from the nightly shore -
    Tell me what thy lordly name is on the Night's Plutonian shore!'
    Quoth the raven6241, `Nevermore.'

    Much I marvelled this ungainly fowl to hear discourse so plainly,
    Though its answer little meaning - little relevancy bore;
    For we cannot help agreeing that no living human being
    Ever yet was blessed with seeing bird above his chamber door -
    Bird or beast above the sculptured bust above his chamber door,
    With such name as `Nevermore.'

    But the raven6241, sitting lonely on the placid bust, spoke only,
    That one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour.
    Nothing further then he uttered - not a feather then he fluttered -
    Till I scarcely more than muttered `Other friends have flown before -
    On the morrow will he leave me, as my hopes have flown before.'
    Then the bird said, `Nevermore.'

    Startled at the stillness broken by reply so aptly spoken,
    `Doubtless,' said I, `what it utters is its only stock and store,
    Caught from some unhappy master whom unmerciful disaster
    Followed fast and followed faster till his songs one burden bore -
    Till the dirges of his hope that melancholy burden bore
    Of "Never-nevermore."'

    But the raven6241 still beguiling all my sad soul into smiling,
    Straight I wheeled a cushioned seat in front of bird and bust and door;
    Then, upon the velvet sinking, I betook myself to linking
    Fancy unto fancy, thinking what this ominous bird of yore -
    What this grim, ungainly, gaunt, and ominous bird of yore
    Meant in croaking `Nevermore.'

    This I sat engaged in guessing, but no syllable expressing
    To the fowl whose fiery eyes now burned into my bosom's core;
    This and more I sat divining, with my head at ease reclining
    On the cushion's velvet violet lining that the lamp-light gloated o'er,
    But whose velvet violet lining with the lamp-light gloating o'er,
    She shall press, ah, nevermore!

    Then, methought, the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
    Swung by angels whose faint foot-falls tinkled on the tufted floor.
    `Wretch,' I cried, `thy God hath lent thee - by these angels he has sent thee
    Respite - respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Lenore!
    Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe, and forget this lost Lenore!'
    Quoth the raven6241, `Nevermore.'

    `Prophet!' said I, `thing of evil! - prophet still, if bird or devil! -
    Whether tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
    Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted -
    On this home by horror haunted - tell me truly, I implore -
    Is there - is there balm in Gilead? - tell me - tell me, I implore!'
    Quoth the raven6241, `Nevermore.'

    `Prophet!' said I, `thing of evil! - prophet still, if bird or devil!
    By that Heaven that bends above us - by that God we both adore -
    Tell this soul with sorrow laden if, within the distant Aidenn,
    It shall clasp a sainted maiden whom the angels named Lenore -
    Clasp a rare and radiant maiden, whom the angels named Lenore?'
    Quoth the raven6241, `Nevermore.'

    `Be that word our sign of parting, bird or fiend!' I shrieked upstarting -
    `Get thee back into the tempest and the Night's Plutonian shore!
    Leave no black plume as a token of that lie thy soul hath spoken!
    Leave my loneliness unbroken! - quit the bust above my door!
    Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my door!'
    Quoth the raven6241, `Nevermore.'

    And the raven6241, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting
    On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
    And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming,
    And the lamp-light o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor;
    And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
    Shall be lifted - nevermore!





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    that poem sounds aewsome... i think i read it a few years ago..

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    i heard someone talking about something like this... so i went to my room and wrote a poem about. go me... dont ****** ask. i know it makes no sense. i was extemely bored when i wrote it.

    "she wanted to keep it,"

    ms. mystery said,

    reciting her feelings

    from the top of her head

    "but misscarriage plagued her,"

    ms. mystery said.

    For laying in pieces,

    her baby was dead.

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    ms. mystery... I like the sound of it. Not quite sibilant, but that's what makes it so interesting.

    Here's a haiku for the morning:

    dead leaves on the track
    lubricated thunder strikes
    cargo train; cold dawn

    I have been itching to use that lubricated thunder bit ever since I came up with it standing on platform 1 of Bonn hauptbahnhof a few days ago.
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    Keep your "lubricated thunder" the hell away from me..
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    You call down the thunder now you're going to get it....
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    I spend my days behind of a desk
    Hiding from work
    I try my best
    My Boss is a jerk
    Who wears a string vest
    I'm just a clerk
    Plotting to destroy the west.*








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    I'm in the mood for nostalgia.



    This is the next best thing right now.
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    Ahh, whatever did we do before nostalgia?
    "When I was a little kid I used to think I had an invisible friend who was with me everywhere I went and could grant me wishes and stuff. Then I grew up and stopped going to church." - Jimmy Carr

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